Well haven't posted on here for a long time, just been too busy trying to the get the film up together.
Last Friday was the first draft hand in and found it very useful, lots of positive criticism to be working on.
Apart from tweaking have quite a meaty chunk to do as she goes to work, the day is over too soon, so my intention is to have her looking in a shop window again to reinforce her duplicity and indicision,reflections! reflections! I picture it that the reflection( with short hair) superimposes with herself using it as a metophor for her wavering decision. Also I read in I think a newspaper cutting from the 1920's about these huge queues of women outside barbers and it would be interesting to incorporate this, it was stated that one barber cut over 70 ladies hair in one day.
Scissors need sorting I agree they look too 'home madey' and really should emphasis contrast between materials.
Will be having a meeting with Caroline on Friday so should be interesting what the feedback is.
(uploaded 12.5 fps Quicktime H.264 set to 70% quality)
not perfect but at least there is something up now to see my progress with it.
Monday, January 28, 2008
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